^THE FRIGHTENING ACCIDENT^

Pinching at the door is the most memorable accident that I ever got when I was in the elementary school. It happened when I wanted to close the class’ door, and my friend pushed it from inside. Firstly, I didn’t realize if my middle finger was pinched because I really didn’t feel any pain. But, when I tried to pull my hand from the door’s holder, I saw my finger was splinted and bleeding. And then, I felt really in pain and cried after I saw it. After that, my mother took me to the hospital, and my middle finger was being checked by a doctor. When he cleaned the blood in my finger, he said that my middle finger must be sewed, but I refused it because I was really afraid about it. Then he didn’t do it, and I came home without any treatment for my finger. Finally, that accident was the most memorable accident that makes me feel traumatic if I saw someone playing or joking at the door.

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^Topic Sentence: Pinching at the door is the most memorable accident that I ever got when I was in the elementary school.

^Topic: The most memorable accident.

^Controlling Idea: Pinching at the door.

^Concluding Sentence: Finally, that accident was the most memorable accident that makes me feel traumatic if I saw someone playing or joking at the door.

_____MY UNIQUE CLASSMATE____

     I have a beautiful unique classmate in university whose name Salsabilah Firdausi. She lives in Cakung. I met her when I first came to study at HAMKA University. She is a really cheerful girl because she always smiles wherever she is. If she met everyone in every place, she often asks unimportant things and offers anything she has to other although she doesn't know whom she is talking to. For example, when she is going to eat at a cafe, she will offer everywhere there, the entire unknown people, to eat. I often feel embarrassing if she did it in front of me, but I realized that thing makes her unique and makes me love her just the way she is.

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Topic sentence: I have a beautiful unique classmate in university whose name Salsabilah Firdausi.

Topic: A beautiful unique classmate in university.

Controlling idea : Salsabilah Firdausi.