I have a beautiful unique classmate in university whose name Salsabilah Firdausi. She lives in Cakung. I met her when I first came to study at HAMKA University. She is a really cheerful girl because she always smiles wherever she is. If she met everyone in every place, she often asks unimportant things and offers anything she has to other although she doesn't know whom she is talking to. For example, when she is going to eat at a cafe, she will offer everywhere there, the entire unknown people, to eat. I often feel embarrassing if she did it in front of me, but I realized that thing makes her unique and makes me love her just the way she is.
NOTE:
Topic sentence: I have a beautiful unique classmate in university whose name Salsabilah Firdausi.
Topic: A beautiful unique classmate in university.
Controlling idea : Salsabilah Firdausi.